https://soundcloud.com/jeffreysbrother/laceys-dream

I recorded this yesterday with a microphone my brother made.
I have a severely compromised monitoring setup, so I'm not sure really what I'm listening to. I wonder if anyone has any constructive advice about the mix--preferably someone who has a decent set of monitors.
I EQ'd everything pretty drastically to eliminate strange buzzes and to fix the overwhelming bass response of the ribbon mic.

Thanks for the help

-james